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Overall it was a good read although there were some things that disappointed me.First thing is a minor gripe (that is overall inconsequential) at the implication in the early chapters that just because MC is male that he's immediately in love with cars cause "natural attraction" is some BS (Source: Me, a man) Second is the insistence in not showing the in-universe public the full extent of MC's OP-ness relative to the ones around him Spoiler
and hiding all of his achievements behind the ML just like A Guide to Raising Your Natural Enemy. The public knows that OP is good but for some reason is forced not to show the full extent (well not the full full extent but all of his martial arts prowess is always shown always to a select few people so the public questions MC)
[collapse]Third is Spoilerthe need for a more powerful ML. MC starts more powerful but for some reason, ML needs to surpass him like they cannot be at equal or stronger to the ML and because of my second gripe, he cannot even show his power when he was more powerful.
[collapse]Fourth is that the ending was way too rushed and unsatisfying. Usually there are extras showing what happens to MC, ML and their family (and maybe what future generations thought of them) after the climax of the story or even just a couple of paragraphs but this one ends with Spoilerthe whole empire's most popular people were MC and ML because they defeated the <enemy from MC life 1> and all of the Zergs and reporters asking about random people's idols
[collapse]. There were so much unfinished plot points.There were technically extras but they had no relation to the main story.