- #1
I finished the first arc and started the second. Based on the first arc's impressions, the pacing is a bit wrong to me. A bit too rushed, like the author couldn't wait to further the plot and then finish writing. It almost feels like it's summarized with some dialogue thrown in, instead of the plot calmly unfolding and drawing you in. Love happens too fast, which I can excuse. Major confrontations are omitted and some important things to the plot happen behind the MC's (and the readers') back. It's just really strange to read, and you can tell the author is a bit inexperienced.That said, it's still interesting to read, and there's hope that the author will improve with later chapters. I wouldn't rate this very high, but I'll give it a chance.
