I Was Reincarnated As The Older Brother Of A Villainess Destined to Die, So I Want To Change The Future By Raising My Younger Sister With My Own Hands ~I Am The Strongest In The World, But My Little Sister Must Be The Cutest In The World~ Chapter 33 / v1c5 part8 Discussion

  • #1
I don't really want to rate after reading just 30 chapters, so let me give you my current score here: 2/5 at most.

I won't really go into detail, since other reviewers did and you have the summary, plus it's too early to judge the novel in detail. Instead, I will tell you what stopped me from reading further.

To put it simply, it was <suspension of disbelief> beyond belief with <half-assery>.

I get it that the author wanted to introduce the setting slowly, starting from small age, but he really overdid it. It makes no sense for small children (aged 5-7) to kill bandits, go fight wild wolves, and even be involved in a damn war... It's one thing for the protagonist, who's a reincarnated adult, but it makes little sense for other kids. And the best part is, the adults around are completely fine with it. It's like it's normal for a preschooler to hold a sword and take part in a castle's siege. Lmao. The protagonist seems to have become the head of the family at the age of 5-6, everyone seems fine with it, and his parents never really appeared. That's some next level of half-assed writing.

Honestly, the author keeps on using time skips, but he only ever skips several months or a year at most. Goddamn fool, you can literally skip by 5-10 years and it'll finally make sense... but no, 5-10 months instead.

Also, the supposed adult MC is being led by the nose by children who are younger than him even when not counting his previous life. This is too cringe, and the pace of getting out of this cringe is way too slow.

One reviewer said the writing is addicting, but the slow pace and uncharismatic protagonist, who also doubles as narrator, are far from addicting. There's nothing special of the sort. Either he read the raw or to each their own. In other words, don't expect to enjoy it if you like fast-paced novels.

A certain reviewer who read as much as me (almost), DimaShishandra, also points out many problems with the worldbuilding in a spoiler. I completely agree with his points. I told you, it's just half-assed.

Also, the in*est is heavy. If you dislike it, don't blame me if you ignore my words - you've been warned.

I honestly don't know why people like this. I guess they must have excellent patience, so I can only commend them.
 
  • #2
Absolutely in love with this book ...️...️
 
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