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this novel started out good, reallybut the more you read it, the more you will realize that the story is going nowhereas some other reviewers say, the author is dragging the story for too longthere are too many unnecessary internal dialogue and redundant explanationsi mean, we're almost 60 chapters, just taking care of a single small fry villain? seriously? and that villain is so s*upid, so 1 dimensional, that we can't sympathize at all with his actsthen, 50+ chapters later when we thought it's finally gonna end... BAM!! another small fry villain and 3 other villains showed up....just finish with one before introducing another bad guy, for god's sake!