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I like this kind of plot, but the characters and the writing is... very amateur. The characters’ personality is inconsistent, it can bend if the story happens to need some cliche development. I know it’s supposed to be light hearted, but the funny moments here are not funny. ML one moment is described as tyrant, one moment he is acting panicky. A lot of cliche moments that didn’t suit with the situation or the characters. I persists for so long because I was curious on how the story will be developed, but it just feels disassociating. For example:Spoiler
When ML realizes he need to let MC to back to his own world first, so that MC can kill himself and stabilize MC soul, then MC come back to ML world. MC soul is in bad situation but ML just didn’t tell MC and is in denial and worried that MC will never come back. The author could’ve gone with either 1. ML prefers MC die in his arms than letting him go back 2. ML let MC go back because he truly treasure MC. But nope, ML just pretends this issue doesn’t exist and stays closer to MC physically even more. Is this the mind of tyrant and smart archduke? He’s just so immature, lack EQ, etc.
[collapse]I feel like this story would get higher rating if the author decides to make this story p*rn with Plot focusing on smut, so that us readers don’t have to focus too much on the story. And it also feels like the author seems interested in smut too.