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It's not bad. But there are a few issues.Adding onto the summary, the MC digs a hole for himself and cannot really get out of it... well, at the start. He's very put off by how his teammates react to him being nice that he simply never ever tries again... despite that he could probably fend them off long enough, especially after he realizes how strong he is. At the very least, where I am right now, it's been like a few months since he tried to tell them. And his own teammates have made attempts to get closer to him. But he refuses. Because he's scared... of what, really? They have him wear a suppressor because they're that scared of his power. He has basically nuked and slaughtered many many groups of people by this point. I think the author is trying to hint that he's scared of being ostracized by every single person he knows, but it's just not done in a good way.This is also a really weird nitpick, but it kind of feels... sexist? The only POVs you'll see are between.... dudes. All of the females have some kind of "mental issue" that makes it hard to see their perspective-- the inquisitor's a religious nut, berserk is a battle junkie, weapon master is too timid.