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Seems like a pretty standard story so far. Keep on looking if your after a well written masterpiece, but for what it is I find myself enjoying it. The pacing is definitely a bit off and the crafting part seems to come to him waaaaaaay to easy. There should be more struggle and trial and error in a crafting based story at least in my opinion. If you can get over those two issues though it's worth a quick read.