Retired Villainess Transmigrates into a Cannon Fodder Chapter 133 Discussion

The storyline is ok

The thing that really grinds my nerves with the sentence structure and the way the author presents things

E.g. A does this action. B reacts with X.A thinks <paragraph>.

Or

A does X. Audience think:"wow. Much amaze very impress."

In one paragraph.

Also, everything is written in 3rd person perspective and straight to the point, and the story is very clear cut with minimized elaboration and details.