Retired Villainess Transmigrates into a Cannon Fodder Chapter 9 Discussion

  • #1
2.4/5

MC is an OP lvl 9292892282829 character in a New Game+. Author has ‘chronic praising MC syndrome’ and everything she does, no matter how mundane, is ✨smart/powerful/beautiful/head turning✨ etc.

It’s like every paragraph of this damn novel can’t STFU about how good she is. I don’t care if MC is OP, I really like the concept, but the authors writing ruined it for me. What happened to ‘show don’t tell’??? SHOW ME THAT SHE’S COMPETENT WITHOUT SAYING SO. 😒 It’s like the author is compensating for their inability to write a competent character so they gotta point it out every single time they do anything.

Side and background characters also display the same syndrome as the author and constantly think ‘Wow MC you’re so cool, beautiful, smart, powerful, amazing... ’ They’re entirely flat and their only purpose is to let you know how good MC is in the most unsubtle way possible.
 
  • #3
I love this story so much. I can't wait for it to be finished. This one and Alpha Gray are my all time favorite books I have ever read. This series is amazing. You are an excellent Author. Thank you so much for such amazing writing. And them frequent Updates. I just love them so much.
 
  • #4
I loved this book it was wonderful to read
 
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