Retired Villainess Transmigrates into a Cannon Fodder Chapter v2 Discussion

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So far, this is a very cliche face slapping novel. First off, the MC is a girl boss, fantasy for self insert. She's very op, and has a lot of respect for herself and the people who are kind to her. I quite like her character, and her attitude to love and marraige. If something makes her unhappy, she gets rid of it. However, she's very one dimensional. Her only personality is to be overpowered and to face slap other people.

Second, the ML. He's a boot licker. Even the novel says he's like a wolf dog. His personality is cute, he's respectful to the MC's will but gets jealous easily at the same time. He's also had the same character setting as the overbearing CEO for all world so far. Not a lot of variation in his character either.

Third, the plot. The author writes very dryly. This isn't helped by the 'translation' that reads like MTL. Paragraphs of long, pointless exposition make it a very boring read at times. I've skipped chapters of ramble to get to the juicy parts. One arc is 70 chapters long?! The transition from one arc to the other is so awkward as well. And the settings are pretty similar so far. The face slapping is pretty satisfying though, I must admit...

Therefore, 3 stars. Not bad but not exceptional either.
 
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