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Thus far an enjoyable read.However, I believe there may be a few scenes missing in some of the chapters as they jump around quite abruptly- specifically in chapter two. I was completely lost halfway through reading that one.Another thing, I agree with the other reviewer- there is a bit of a harrassed feeling. Overall, it's fun to read, I like the MC, but I think it would have been better had the ML been introduced to the dating show at a later time as with him showing up on only the second day, it makes any interaction with the other guests feel kind of pointless. If the MC had more time to integrate into the setting and interact more with the other guests before the prodigal childhood friend showed up, I believe that harrassed feeling would have been lessened.
