- #1
It's... ok. It's good, and will keep you reading, but it has nothing that makes me want to come back after I've caught up.It's missing those beautiful "oh shit" moments, where you put down your phone, swing your legs, and scream like a little girl. It's intriguing, but pretty flat. Oh also, the author has this habit of covering up plot holes by having the MC say something like "I It must be because this is how the author wrote it" which got annoying really fast. speaking of the MC, he's a bit of a jerk, with no set personality and character traits that vary wildly depending on the situation. One minute he can be riding on the back of a giant monster and eating with the crown princes "son", while the next he can be super rude to some old lady who is in hysterics thinking she betrayed her country and pissing his pants trying to not get involved in the plot. He's nice to some people, rude to others, brave about something's and uselessly cowardly about others, it makes his character seem very fake, He feels like a cowardly oppertunist disguised as a holy man, which is ironically exactly what he is. Doesn't make for a great MC tho. Also, he's a Mary Sue. (So far at least)