- #1
The writing was a little stressful, it had whole lot off the online comments and jumped out of nowhere from memory to memory, making it hard to understand.I think not using the "system" to explain things to MC was a waist of character, it woul have helped to make the plot and the writing make sense, I mean, at the beginning, the casual interaction that he had with the family of the "original So Yung" was a little bizarre, as if he knew how to interact with them (I know that it's the idea but it would have added, some ground).I like the idea of revenge, but the villains were too two dimensional, just status and money, and repeated the same things, it was too on the nose that it was written to make the readers angry and feel satisfaction from the talk back by MC, we were all on edge expecting the sweet comeback of the year from Mr millionaire Family.The parts when MC remembers his childhood its annoying, thinking that a 5 year old would talk like that and just saying that he was only repeating what he saw on TV made no sense.and eliminating the whole disease was silly, it would've made some cliché but interesting interaction with MC and ml.As a whole I'll give it a 3 but I think it too overhyped.