- #1
2.5 rounded up for now. The concept is great. The execution is decent to poor. The writing leans heavily on game system cliches in writing with a good twist, which is that the MC is acting as a typical harem character for points. But the writing is pitiful. The level of descriptive details is basically 0. The world building is a 4 at best. The amount of exposition is at a 10 with only the necessary amount of details in order for there to be a plot to progress. The character descriptions are there but written like a middle school writer. The amount of telling over showing is like an 8. "She is this. He is like this. We went here." Straightforward writing with no extra description.The unique concept alone is carrying this novel 100%. The moments when the MC scolds the Scammer in her mind are the only unique writing moments that allow me to want to read more. I wish the writing was better. For now although I like this concept enough to want to read more to see if it's worth it, there's really nothing that makes me want to wait for it. I'll come back if the translations finish and I am bored with reading other things.
