- #1
It's a decent story however the translation is horrible. Names mixed up gender mixed up repeatedly. I found myself rereading paragraphs three times just to understand who is supposed to be speaking. If it gets a good polish id raise it to 4 stars. Story seedling needs to have someone competent in English to edit and polish the books. Often their site is lacking in this aspect it's as if a bunch of ten year olds are doing the editing.
