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I kind of felt like I wasted my time at the end by ch 66 I was just wanting to drop it already. This story confused me so much, call me dumb but I really felt like it was so disjointed at times and bizarre in many ways.the age gap made me uncomfortably and I honestly felt that they should have aged the ML up or straight up waited until he was 17 minimum. And then when they were doing the unmentionable he called him ‘ dad’ or ‘ daddy’. I was trying to overlook it cause I’m almost finished but whyyyyyyyyy. I felt physical pain and wanted to give the MC a smack.what is the MCs ambition clearly it was at first revenge but I’m honestly stumped at how the MC behaves at times. I don’t know what I’m rooting for and though I can laugh at the kids antics they still felt quite flat as characters and the time skips didnt help this problem; which is why they could have been aged up and had a reduce in time skips. Though I love characters that are similar to them I feel little to none connection with any of them and would not care if they got hurt.the romantic relationship was bland and I felt as though the MC is only tolerating the mls advances and I felt little connection in their relationship. I stopped feeling sympathy for the MC and since his skills were not as expanded as they could be he was not as interesting so his role as an MC is kinda pointless. I’m not rooting for him and honestly can’t remember much about him other then him being super attractive and calm or some rubbish.This is so unmemorable that I might as well have not read it. Literal fever dream of things that are vague and not properly executed.A good starting point and premise it just fell so flat near the middle and end.
