Return To Player Chapter Completed Discussion

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Updated thoughts:

it's not anything groundbreaking, nor is it a masterpiece. It's very lacking on the romantic side until the end. That said, it is a fun journey and has a bit of its own charm that feels different from other stories in this genre. It has a decent, if a tad cliched ending. I think if the author was a better writer this story could've been excellent, as is though it's simply decent to good category. 3.5 stars

should you read it? If you like the first 20-40 chapters or the the manhwa, the story stays the same level of quality the whole way through. —Original review from c142–

Currently about half way through so just writing some basic thoughts if you're thinking about picking it up.

Story has some interesting mechanics that are well put together. Sometimes the arcs feel a bit too narrow, in that it's usually MC + one or two others that are the focus for the arc while everyone else just disappears for awhile. It's not a bad thing, but probably a weak spot of the author.

Definitely feels a bit different to other stories in this genre which is why I'm still reading it, but the jury is out on if it's a good or great story. It'll all depend on how the author can pull together the strings they've laid so far.

oh also, the characters are a bit shallow right now imo. They don't feel too deep, but that's also typical of the genre. If you want deep characters go read Sss su*cide.

tl:dr - it's not bad, if you like this genre give it a try
 
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I don't understand why anyone would want Eliza to get with Chester. He is an evil and arrogant rapist. The author acts like it's no big deal that he forced her to have sex and then  just totally degraded her.
 
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