- #1
The story feels like it has two main plots: MC's life with his family & MC's life with his friends. The focus shift was done badly.
The author started too strongly with MC's motivation to rebel towards this one family member from his past life. So it felt freaking weird when the story suddenly shifted to his time with his friends who was never mentioned in his past life and it has its own small plot!
The two story might intersect later though, but I have no patience to put up with all the uninteresting details and writing.
The characters are either spitting on the MC or licking him. Currently, there are no between.
The face slapping is good I guess. MC is not s*upid. The ML seems nice and trustful. Their relationship seems it'll be fluffy and good later on (unfortunately I don't have the patience)
So there are definitely rooms for improvement. But I still think that this story is mainly for those who like face-slapping family drama with an MC who has dog-licking followers (perhaps, just for the sake of it).
It's not really well written and the translation is not especially good, so if you don't especially like these type, I think just skip.
PS: huge age gap, and at the start the MC was not in college yet. But he already at age if I'm not mistaken.
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