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What can I say about this novel? Oh yes, disappointing.Rikisui, that's the name of the author, always does the same thing, decent start, decent or good world construction, average characters. You know, not the best novel but a nice reading to kill boredon.BUT, yes with capsAs always, Rikisui works hard to destroy his own work. He loves to add some politic comflict comming from nowhere or some random cheap complots. I'm going to say it clearly, this author is a complete disaster on it. Just don't add sh*t on your novel, Rikisui (you won't read this mr author, but you should 🤣). He made the same thing on "The Adventure of the Boy With a Mind of a Middle-aged Man"The worst thing is the 5th arc, a complete disaster. The author forget about the initial characters and he centers on the first enemy of the first arc, a simpletone prince. Yes, a whole arc for a s*upid mob and it's the longest arc in the novel. But that's not the worst, that character is surrounded by even more annoying characters.Even..., even..., even worst, that arc was also written in first person and when it jumps to the original characters it's also first person, so it's horribly confusing. If you are a writter don't be Rikisui and don't do the Rikisui, if you like to write coral novels with many characters and you want to center the action on many of them, NEVER write in first person, NEVER. That's a basic of writting.I'm giving 2 stars because the start is nice, but the 5th arc deserves minus one million stars.The translators, they made a good job, it's not their fault but if would be cool if they didn't translate the whole 5th arc and they just resume it with 3 lines. That arc doesn't deserve more and they would save our suffering (and their own suffering too). Thanks for your work, you translators are the best of the novel.Remember, don't be Rikisui, my friend.