- #1
I like it but there's a few problems I had with this story.I don't really care for side character's backstories before they meet MC, it feels long and tedious to read so I skimmed through it.The slice of life parts where MC spent time with his brother was sweet, but boring af. There's nothing interesting about it (in my personal opinion) .Then there's this girl who appears... the girl. Juri is a stalker- she's been stalking MC when he gets bullied... stalking MC home... found out he has a brother (nothing bad here but when said later, it makes me feel weird), she has a crush on MC which developed after stalking him around here and there and developed deep affections for him.... okay. She got upset/disappointed when MC didn't remember her name but like... they never spoke to each other in class... okay. Its a relief she doesn't act weird in front of him though which I like so I can tolerate her but I really don't know if I like her as a potential FL.I also got issues with the writing, it's kind of weird. The internal mono-dialogue is really repetitive to the narration which outs me off at times and I mistake them as speaking out loud when it's actually in their head but it's manageable.MC is a little on the plain side for me.There are good points though I love, love, LOVE how the MC shows off he's strong from the start, specifically to everyone and those dumbass nobodies who would usually look down on MCs in other novels with this similar type of setting. I fell in love with this part.