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The Story makes very little sense. The first few chapters are okay but it quickly devolves into nonsense as the female characters turn into mindless moe blobs and the MC despite apparently being average oneshots every big name somehow. None of the fights are earned. The author keeps hyping up all the mc's opponents like they're the best of the world or whatever but the MC just keeps oneshotting everyone, with the convenient excuse that "well he got wounded" that gets cured in a chapter. Nothing ever has bad consequences for the protag, he never loses, he is never in risk. The fights suck.It's really bad. Also the protagonist is quite frankly just too much of a dense moron, and many of his antics make 0 sense. Spoiler
At one point his "future self" comes back and tortures an a once-antagonist. The protag knows this and decides that the best way to cure her traumatization is to torture her further. The biggest issue is, the author doesn't write this from the perspective of "hey the MC is kinda crazy", the author writes is as if it was his only option and was the right one. Yup, had to torture that person bro. 12 year olds on this site unironically believe in sh*t like sigmas and betas so they worship Xianxia-like maniacs like this MC but it gets tiring very quickly.
[collapse]Stuff that makes 0 sense like this are spread everywhere in the novel, where the protag acts in a manner that is absolutely insane and yet the author writes it as if it were the sole option available.Also half the girls in the novel are antagonists-turned-gf by stockholm syndrome, which again makes no sense but hey, that's a WN for you.