I Woke up to Find I Have a Child Chapter Completed Discussion

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I like this novel but like one of the other reviewers only about half the time.

The whole detailed acting subplot doesn’t really add any value to the romance plot and is representative of this story’s biggest weakness - siloing.

Each individual subplot or storyline feels like it was conceived separately and exist beside each other, not integrated into each other. This story could’ve been infinitely stronger if it integrated the emotional moments across plots. Since it didn’t, the characters are left feeling as less of characters and more as narrators.

Still a good story despite its flaws.
 
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