Before the Cannon Fodder Eloped Chapter -- Discussion

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It's not that great. The pacing was my biggest problem.

There was a time skip after she started working at pharmaceutical company. And then a very compact period of 1yr after she went to capital city; growing business, renovating home, getting engaged & married. Too fast. The author claimed MC was developing slowly but she really wasn't.

I was annoyed that MC let her sister control her finances. She could have easily invested on behalf of her sister who wasn't knowledgeable, farsighted or courageous enough.

The romance is negligible but the ML is sweet.
 
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