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Writing style is elementary school level.Extremely short sentences and the structure is questionable.No descriptive words at all."A car", "home", "room", "office", all you get is a location, absolutely nothing about the environment, often not even anything about a character's facial expressions or body language.All of this gets worse the further the story progresses, sentences get even shorter, even less descriptions, it's like the writer wanted to only write dialogue split into five word sentences.There a quite a few characters, none of them has actual character and you learn nothing about them.Even after 20 chapters, I have no idea what MC or ML like, dislike, how they think about anything, they are blank slates.And there's non-consensual s*xual contact.No, I'm not thankful that it wasn't full blown penetrative r*pe, and that it was portrait like some kind of generous help only makes it worse.Especially because, apparently, a doctor would have been all that was needed for it to be unnecessary for the ML to assault MC.The "romance" is very sudden, ML falls in love after MC went into heat/assaulting him, when he never considered MC as anything but his secretary.They aren't friends, he knows nothing about MC, they never even interacted outside of work.A lot of Korean readers commented that the novel is childish, tacky/cringe, and "off".I agree and totally understand why the ratings on different sites are low.
