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While I've enjoyed reading this so far, it does constantly irritate me in one aspect. The author has obviously never been around children and has no clue how 2, 3, 5, and 8 year-olds think. I'm not talking about reincarnators either... those have an excuse. Instead, he takes a 2 year old and writes her as if she were 15 and overwhelmed by raging hormones. He takes 5 year-olds and writes them having conversations that no 5 year-old could possibly follow (again... not talking about the reincarnator). This is one thing that almost every LN/WN that involves children does very poorly in, but this series is probably the worst I've read so far in this one aspect. I get that you want the MC to be a kid, and that you have no way to push dialog forward without giving him people he can talk to on the same level, but it's beyond absurd unless you want to pretend every child in that world is born with an IQ over 200. Putting dialog aside, it's morbidly disturbing to read about a three year old basically writhing in throes of passion when her 5 year old brother kisses her cheek.Honestly, this series would have been a LOT better if it had jumped to their teenage years after the first few chapters.If you ignore the fact that the author has never seen a kindergartener before, the story is entertaining and quite enjoyable.