- #1
The treatment towards Oscar and Damian is deplorable by both ML and FL since she’s basically a bystander at best.There’s a lot of unused potential and plenty of plot holes.FL is pretty much useless throughout the novel. All she can do apparently is sort out letters by importance and apparently that takes her days on end. The novel states she’s been educated and whatnot during her stay at the house by the beach but she disregards even basic manners or she has a huge lack of knowledge of the empire’s history and so forth. At some point the novel mainly focuses on the ML forcing FL to be 24:7 with him but that’s pretty much it. No character depth at all. Frustrating really... I almost forgot. Their secret knocking code drove me crazy. I thought it’s childish at first but when the author wrote it again and again and again it became super annoying.