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It's so slow paced and beefed with word content I can't enjoy it. If you like novels with a lot of self (mc) development and a slower pace you'll like it though. Through the 7 chapters, that are at least above 20k word count total, we still have zero plot developments and progression. Every chapter is MC feeling bad, MC debating leaving, MC trying to get stringer, MC's family getting bullied by family. Did I forget to mention the moms a widow? Because I'll make sure to put it multiple times in each chapter to remind you.The worst part of this novel for me is a system was randomly thrown in, it is so out of the blue, unnecessary, and conflicting with the whole story. It's hard to explain but you'll understand when you read it. A Fantasy Magic world with very seriousish writing tone out of nowhere, when he got stronger after a certain point[Hi I'm the system! I'm here to break your immersion and all the development we just had. Tee-hee!]It only serves to notify when he "levels up" and for him to check his condition which was already explained he could check with his mana. Ig the author was so desperate to make it more slower paced he wanted more filler to beef up the word count even more.Again, I can only suggest those to who are looking for self development. This is really the only possitive trait on the novel for me. Even the other characters including MC are pretty two dimensional and predictable