Lord of Flames Chapter 54 Discussion

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Stopped reading this selfinsertion fantasy when the author introduced electricity into his city with 300k inhabitants... Man this author knows nothing about supply chains or food/ supplement needs of the body - everyone just eats potatoes - just like the brain of the author.

Also ignoring the blatant le*ding after underage (15+) girls, there is 0 world building etc. Races just magically appear when he needs new stuff - oh yeah we probably need cavalry - so centaurs are cool. Dwarves for smiths etc and his powers are always the answer to any problem, his believers never have their own ideas - it's the omnipotent fire that knows everything.

Well he was a billionaire genius philanthropist in his former life... And he managed that all in his early 20-30s.

Self insertion circlejer... Fantasy that is extremely braindead...

0/10
 
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