- #1
There's a lot of fluff so far.While I like a speedy story, their relationship is developing way too fast. The ML is already kissing MC, making MC sit on his lap, nibbling on his ear, saying 'I love you' to him like it's absolutely nothing.. After their SECOND meeting. I can understand the MC because of his past life but for ML.. It's unrealistic. Not even a bit of shyness?I hope there's a backstory on how the ML actually fell in love with MC. If it is that MC's mom saved ML and he owes her a debt, then that is not a legit reason.