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Won't rate as I only made it to chapter 7, but I feel like I missed the first half of the novel. I'm not saying there needed to be some drawn out drama, but just a bit of character and world building would have been great. Their relationship progress felt more like the author's day dream than an actual story.The writing is very immature, I wouldn't be surprised if the author was in highschool when they wrote it. Let's not even mention how a 15 year old fell in love with a 10 year old.....I may try the story again at a later date when what I'm looking for is sugar with absolutely no substance.
