- #1
Honestly.... for most of the time I was reading it, I just felt really uncomfortable. I was hoping for a significant time-skip that would allow the age gap to be less weird, but that unfortunately did not occur. Instead we have this 19-20 year old cuddling and getting 'lovey-dovey' with this 10 year old girl. The story is good, the characters got a bit bland after the initial chapters, but were acceptable. Again, just coming back to a grown-ass man being with a 10 year old child. I honestly don't see the point, was the author trying to target a specific audience? I don't think so, I certainly hope not. If he wanted a younger MC, couldn't she have at least been mid-teens? That would've been fine, even with adjusting a few of the story elements and plot points, nothing would have been different and this extreme sense of discomfort that me and many other readers were feeling would go away. I gave this three stars because of the story, could have gotten more if I wasn't cringing every few paragraphs.
