5 Big Shots Kneeled and Called Me Mom Chapter 4 Discussion

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How should I say this? It's cringy and I can't bear to continue.

The premise was very good and it had great potential. I just had to question the logic behind the whole thing.

Mobile phones hadn't been invented yet but cryonics technology had advanced. She had already been cured 13 years ago and was basically in a coma that remaining time and yet she hadn't aged? Unless she's put back in the freezer after being cured? Forgive me but this leap of logic is dizzying for me.

Next was her ditziness. 25 years had passed. She's basically 20 years old before being frozen. What does a 20 year old antique do? Get the heck out of dodge. Excuse me but hadn't she seen how her environment had changed? She knew her way home, how to take a plane and how to take a cab. Hadn't she realized the world had changed just based on her going through airport security? Even an ancient person transmigrating to the modern world would get confused and look panicked and out of place. No one even noticed her except marveling at her age. Is she blind? In those 25 years, technology should have advanced by leaps and bounds but she wasn't the least bit curious or showed a country bumpkin excitement that would let her get noticed among the crowd.

She's calm and composed. She's too freaking calm about this!!!

I'm sorry, I'm having goosebumps by the time she met her son so I can't continue reading.

Maybe when I'm in a different mood, I'll continue. Just not right now.
 
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