- #1
This is one of the worst translation sites on novelupdates. Not the translation, but the literal site... the whole sites in a mess, and there is also no next chapter button, and you can't change by url...As for the actual story, the mystery plot was a bit interesting, as the world is different from the original Harry potter world, but everything else was mid. Especially the characterization. The main plot was okay, but I lost all hope for the small events in between. As we already got a Chinese type antagonist cliche if Malfoy and him being the hero in shining armor defending himself and Hermoine.I also never like fanfics when they meet the main cast within the first few chaos, can't they have some buildup or make their own story that intertwines into the story for God's sake?