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I enjoyed it so far but. It's more like watching a bear grills entire season lol, and the writing is quite good when it's about survival in wilderness but when it comes to the rest of the plot... plot holes galore. Why not contact family through broadcasts? Why not use the camera as a tool more, like when determining positioning. How come they don't recognize each other? For such a smart MC, he's brainless not to recognize ml. Why does ML insist on keeping his identity hidden from MC for over 100 ch? The guide's behavior in the desert arc doesn't make sense. Them not noticing the live cocoon doesn't make sense when MC is so prepared and attentive all the time. The housekeeper staying near the amusement park with the kid when there are magic vines doesn't make sense. Turning the camera off when the poachers die, why? Going on the ship and being careless to leave wet sand around them? Being so easy going with the system when the same system basically threatens him with his kid's life if he doesn't obey? F that s—t.This had the potential of being quite awesome if it was edited at least once more and fixed. Not to mention MC'S sudden starry eyes at his discovered 'commander" annoy me lol.still an okay read, just disappointed about the lost potential. Probably reading mtl doesn't help any