City Of Witches Chapter 326 Discussion

this was a good novel, magic, world setup, characters, relations etc etc and I enjoyed it but I guess this is where I drop it

first problem is not about the novel but the mtl, it was bearable at first but from the ch 250 it got hella worse imo, but I would still bear with it buuut

I dont really enjoy drama's, and this novel has one every once in a while. if its goodly written I would read it but this novels drama's are nearly always way too forced and unnatural that I cant stand it. I understand its magic world so most things will get solved (or get handled) very differently, but almost all the time author chooses normal developments for relationships, yet needs to bring up magic stuff all the time for drama to create bs.

disc: next spoiler is more of a me being frustrated rather than a review)

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I m at the point where he f*** elroa, and got his memories erased. you might understand my anger/dissatisfaction if you remember it, like at first mc's IQ nerfed by %90 so that he wouldnt understand what elroa is saying and got elroa misunderstood the whole situation, and then twins make a love potion "AGAIN", just for this whole drama to get bigger (I know that author made twins socially inept and slow af but even then they would rething before pulling some s*** again (basically the third time if we count sharon too) , then made everything convenient to the point that it didnt make any sense anymore (so somethef***how elroa is able manipulate memories, but unable to see through sloppyly made love potion by appreantice withces, WTF. btw I wont even talk about how elroa didnt see through mc's attitude doing a 180degree turn just because she was flustered a bit)

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aside from that, I dont really like how magic gets handled for mc

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everything was ok at first but after some time it slowed down and after elroa came it kinda dissapeared. like he had reaaly good abilites like making more mana through duplicating with very good puirty and inherited the ribbons, whytf is he making armor and fighting with swords ? ribbons gets more attention in s** scenes rather than fights lmao. Btw wtf happened to the tree he drew in his autistic state? why author just threw it there and left it for more than 150 chapters?

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and my final problem is, mc

MC was a very good character at first, altough undeveloped with a weak mentality, we saw him develop and stood his guard and try to cope with his problems as best as he can yet through all of this he was still a human and had emotions, but

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after he meets sharon, he turns into a normal shonen MC rather fast (aside from all the f*** and bit of a tragedy from amelia)

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he certainly got mundane and boring after that, like atm it feels like I m reading a slow life manga MC and worse is he is the kind that gets always pushed around...

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again, this is a very good novel, even for non ero ones. but the problems of this novels problems doesnt seem like it would end and seems like it would get even worse than that, which destroys my hopes and stops me from continuing