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It's got potential. The premise of the story is pretty unique and definitely something nice to read. It reminds of Little Tyrant tbh.I only have 1 major problems with this, that is, it has a lot of info dumps. Sometimes, half the chapters would be filled with nothing but him explaining his experiments and whatnot, so the story is incredibly slow to progress.It's honestly unnecessary and breaks the flow of the story. You can literally cut that part out and you wouldn't miss anything in the plot.
