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Just a short review/ first impressions.Before the review itself however I must mention. See if you can get your hands on the original text and just MTL it. This translator sometimes has decent parts of the chapter simply missing. Like in chapter 15 the entire part about MC meeting his second daughter was cut out. Its incredibly jarring because you notice the cut in the story.Other reviews mostly point out what I'm about to say. Theres decent mystery about the human vs dragon dynamic and the MC getting betrayed. His relationship with the daughters is nice. The MC and the heroine being enemies that acknowledge each other while also being romance shouldn't come off as a surprise at all but its done pretty well.But one of my problems with the novel is that its quite slow. Sometimes one party is on top while sometimes its the other and very rarely they'd collaborate together either pretending to be a family to others or actually being a family to raise the daughters. But a lot of the former situation keeps repeating and the novel spends an unnecessarily long time describing it, minus actually describing the s*x part because this is a chinese novel and that's not allowed. The world development or exploring the human vs dragon dynamic or the mystery behind the MC's betrayal is either not explored or just sidelined at the first excuse.Its still an 8 out of 10, but I'm putting it on hold for now, will pick it up sometime in the future but for now the story progression is a bit slow.