- #1
Take it with a grain of salt bc I only read it till 35 chapters. But I don't see any reason for me to continue reading this novel. I'm fine with MC having little personality or the overblown wealthiness of MC's family (Actually this is one of the thing that make me interested. How will author mix wealthy family drama into an unlimited flow+retail genre haha). Nor do I have any problem with infinite flow (ish) novel for not having good enough puzzle/horror/action. But this novel have all of it at the same time.Novel have bad writing or/and plot? Then make the characters more interesting, make the interaction more interesting. Author can't make an interesting personality for their protagonist? Then turn up the action and mystery solving to the notch. As some previous reviews might say, I think this novel would be great without any changes to the story except the MC's personality. Or at least add some mysterious-ness to him to keep some fun in him.You might think I'm being pretentious here but I've read a lot of UF and some retail novels. Definitely those have at least something that were engaging for the readers to keep moving. Like I'm pretty curious about ML and how the shop will came to be. But world 3 broke the camel's back. I am very dumbfounded with how poorly the logic were handled.Example:
- MC and everyone heard a loud stomping sound from upstair. MC speaks out that it might be a giant. Other chara ask why he would think of that. MC gave a very obvious reason (well bc it's loud af). And everyone wowed at him??
- Another one. MC think they should investigate the second floor bc as they all know, it was the one floor they haven't explored yet. Other characters: "He obviously a newcomer, how could he think for such breakthrough?" Yeah no shit???