- #1
Almost 100 chapters in, and the word that may best describe this novel is: anticlimactic.Lee Hwan (our MC) is overpowered. Yeah, I can almost feel you shaking your head. Thinking: "MC is supposed to be OP!"But Hwan is too over the top. There is nothing that can come close to endanger him. Ever. He will just pull a new skill out of his a** and pummel whomever goes against him...Anyway, let's get to the good, the bad and the ugly:The Good
- MC is decisive. That is for sure. Not all of his decisions are exactly bright, but he won't waste a chapter mulling over his options.
- The supporting cast is 'good enough'. They're not fully fleshed out characters with well thought-out backgrounds and motivations. But they're not totally flat also.
- No harem! Yes, this is a positive point... There are three women in MC's marry band of misfits. And he only laid his hands on one.
- Romance is bare bones to say the least. MC's relationship started somewhat abruptly. But it is slowly developing as the story progresses.
- MC kills people and there is absolutely no repercussions. There is always some convoluted explanation on how everything is swept under the rug.
- MC's morals are twisted to say the least. Nonexistent if we're being completely honest. And his background history is too vague to fully justify this. Spoiler
He killed his own father in one chapter. Again, it doesn't mean you can't write this scene. But gimme something more than: "He abandoned mom", or "He almost beat me to death when I was five". There isn't enough emotional weight on the writing...
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