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What even is this story? It's ridiculous. It spends so much time in the weirdest places. Delusions. Internal dialogue about idiotic thoughts. Or hitting on men? Like constantly. Complaining about not wanting to be labeled a lo*icon but staring down the same loli's with impure or sadistic thoughts. He's redundant and says conflicting things often. The characters too. After about chapter 5 they just show up don't do anything significant and then have this larger role after making them back ground mobs. Also they become super aggressive. Or talking about something in the plot getting deeper where you're interested, but it's resolved in the next paragraph with little to no explanation. I've been waiting for 2 chapters to figure out where a missing adventurer went.Or he the author made it super ominous that the dwarf is missing but she is back in a paragraph with nothing. She was just working. But the MC was worried, and asking about her whereabouts and what she's doing. So much emphasis on dragging out a chapter. Also the MC is naive, dumb borderline deserves to be evaluated. Reads all kinds of books wanting to know all these topics but is not able to execute or think in the least bit. I read the tags but there's a limit to how underprepared someone can be right? Someone gives him some strong plot armor just to survive even. He doesn't stand up for anyone and takes a b*tchmade mentality on seeing others suffer or being a coward when it comes time to stand his ground. I'm sure it'll change it always does but... you'll lose your readers interest before any of that happens. He cowers before "stronger" people and shys away from praise but begs for it. Redundant. Be a hero? Yea try being a proper man first. Also what is his f*ckING OBSESSION WITH A GODDAMN DRAGON COMING OUT OF THE MIASMA HOLE?! is this foreshadowing?! f*cking do it already or dont