Ex Strongest Swordsman Longs For Magic In Different World Chapter 315 Discussion

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summery: guy fights a dragon-god and "wins" but dies of injuries in the first chapter. Reincarnated as an infant and by age 3 he already speaks like an adult. so does his 2 year old sister. 3 year time skip and he's 6 years old when the story really starts. His sister and the other girl in the profile pic are 5 years old. They meet an elf... who is 30 but looks like she's 5 as well. And all three of them enroll in elementary school together. The whole time, with zero explanation, everyone treats these 5 & 6 year olds like adults. Then he meets a 15-25 year old Dragonkin. She also looks like she's 5. Then they meet another elf who is at least 70 years old... she also looks like a 6/7 year old. But male elves apparently look like adults.

in 300 chapters there is literally ZERO character development. The way the characters are introduced are how they act forever with the exception of when they become part of the pe*ophile-harem and turn into empty shells that just say the same lines every chapter.

The writing in some chapters is 100% nonsensical ramblings. The rest of the chapters said rambling takes up more than half the chapter. It's like the author literally just wrote down whatever words came to mind and never reread what they wrote.

Lastly:

Spoiler

WN went on hiatus at 390. MC still can't do magic. It's just the same thing over.

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when will the next chapter be ready, is taking too much time o o
 
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