Dungeon Farm Chapter 4 Discussion

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The concept of farming in a dungeon was interesting, but the story devolves into simplistic game mechanic. The main character also made no preparations. His father also seemed shocked, though his son admits to having a personality unsuited for the role of a noble knight. The translation reads well, but a lot of potential hooks left unexplored leaves this a mediocre story.
 
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