- #1
At first I thought it was just that the translation wasn't very good, but I pulled up the raws and I don't think the original novel is that well written either. There are a lot of characters and complex interpersonal relationships, but they don't go over in the book very well who is related to who how and often times people are brought up in the story well before they're introduced, or it's just barely brushed over. After a while it's too hard to keep track of who is who. Plus the translation calls two or three different people 'patriarch' and there are quotes from multiple people talking in each paragraph with is janky.