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I like it, but-It kind of feels like a mesh of a lot of dungeon stories. Everything reminds me of other stories, a cascade of deja vus. MC has a brother missing, feels like a deja vu. OG protag had been living in hell and continuously fighting his way through it for centuries, deja vu. The MC originally tr*sh bag, oh- that's probably most of the stories. I would deal with cliches- but it doesn't feel like just cliches.I suppose the only different thing would be reverse harem- but even that feels a little forced.