Must Spend the Villain’s Money Before He Goes Bankrupt Chapter Completed Discussion

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This story has many minor flaws but I still enjoyed it very much. MC and ML interactions are cute and heart warming ML is not overbearing he love and respect MC wishes.

Many side characters were introduced with a lengthy background explanation just to be easily forgotten I feel like Author went out of her way for nothing. One character particularly confused me

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Chen Yu, I think that's his name was introduced as a transmigrated soul from cultivation world only to appear for one chapter and was mention in one paragraph in another. Unless the Author were planning to write a story about this character later on and this is a crossover if not this mention of transmigration soul was very unnecessary.

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The extra chapter of Cheng Ran was also unnecessary all it does was left many more questions at the end. Overall an enjoyable read
 
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