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I'm very fond of Mary Sue stories, as long as the plot and the FL personality is likeable. The story started really good: the plot was a familiar summoning, with the MC being thrown out of a country by corrupt royalty, yada yada... But it had a lot of charm.But from chapter 30 onwards the plot starts to deteriorate. And I am really prejudiced with shoujo FL's in japanese stories since they are usually written with a meek and wood-like personality. Srsly, if the FL is overpowered why does she need to keep falling into obvious traps and acting like a dansel in distress with every single character other than the ML?There's a point in which her passivity just went beyond what's acceptable. Its not cute, its not likeable... And honestly? It doesn't fit MC.Since the beginning she is a person with low self-steem because of her backstory, but she should be able to know how to impose herself. Instead... how come... the more powerful she becomes the more useless she becomes. Ayah.