- #1
The usual plot with cliche and not much character development, this one feels more bland and stilted flow than others.The usual MC suddenly liked by all, original kind and smart FL suddenly has her brain go offline and become villainous, super OP ML with no clear plot as to how he is so OP, liked MC for no reason and starts spending money on her like crazy (here it's even more absurd than 'oh she is different so I will notice her', no reason!!). He comes online, stands and throws his aura around, bullies MC with pampering hidden in eyes (!?) for no reason, goes offline. No dialogue between them, no pov from his end, no thoughts apart from oh face slap that cannon fodder, he bullied this FL who is total stranger to me, when I usually don't look at girls at all.Bit meh.Some good points, esp if new to the genre. MCs sis-con brother is pure and cute, FLs original drawings are somewhat nice. May be later chapters has some character development.