Marvel Hogwarts Wizard Chapter 484 Discussion

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First and foremost, this is my fist review, so please dont mind weird sentences (as english is not my main) and a sometimes unstructured feeling this review gives off.

What I like :

A very good system about a magic framework

It stays close to the Marvel related timeline in many parts

The Main Character has a fixed viewpoint and bottom line, which he doesnt throw away midway

The introduced Characters also have an alive feeling

What I dont like :

Its sometimes hard to stay on the MCs thinking process

The Power Level or structur is a little hard to comprehend

Now a more detailed Impression on the points above and with my personal thoughts.

Why I think this magic framework is very good

I really like the beginning framework and explanations behind how and why the magic works, even if some may think that the basics are from some of the series (like Harry Potter), it still has its own flair to it while the Author tried to combine different frameworks and combines them to Jerrys (MC) own magic system. While this system is sometimes not explained in detail, you still get a very good grasp of it through MCs continous study and improvement. And up till now, I really really like this magic framework and love the explanations, the structuring and the jorney delivered to the reader while MC searches to improve himself.

It stays to the Marvel timeline

While the MCU is really big already, with the System the MC got, the Author has combined not only the MCU and different worlds, with different laws and possibilities, he still gave most of them a very good order and explanations behind them (Im not aware if most of the structuring of the MCU and the crossover Worlds already had this structuring or if its from the Author, so please dont mind if I give my credits to the Author)

Despite the differences in time and the obvius increase in MCs strengh, you still have the most important Events of the MCU till the Timeline of Age of Ultron. MC definetly got his Marks in this Events, still stays in the Shadows to minimise the timeline discrepancies to stop heavy butterfly effects from happening till he is strong enough.

MCs Character

While I say I like the MCs viewpoint most of the time and that he has a fixed goal he trys to achieve and doesnt just change his viewpoints or bottom line midway without thinking, I still got some problems to understand the Character sometimes. While the Author says he is around 40 in his mind after reincarnating, he is very open to killing and torture to achieve his goal. To say, he is kinda cold blooded and a pragmatist, which I dont understand why. There is no backstory or playbacks on his past to let me understand the MCs thinking. While I personally dont mind, because he still trys to minimize killing if there is a more usefull solution which brings him more profits in the long run, he is definetly not your run of the mill reincarnator.

Side Characters

While the Characters unique to this Fanart, have an alive feeling and reasoning, they sometimes fade to much in the background. They have their own thoughts and mindset, which I really like, but because of the sometimes long times which the MC takes to study and learn new magics, or is in different universes, the side characters, like his family in the marvel universe, sometimes get forgotten by me. Could also be my own thoughts on it, but while I can understand why MC can take so much time without them, just so he can protect them, I still get the feeling that, while they are alive, they have very little impact.

Power Structure

As I already talked about the MCs thinking, I will now talk about the Power Measurements.

I will say that the whole structure of power is kind of related to the MCUs structure, it is also re-realized from the MCs viewpoint and understanding. So while I kind of get most of the levels and differences in Power, it is still quite hard to get a concrete measurement on how strong somebody really is. And then there is also still the difference between Main Universe and the Small Worlds where the MC can travel to.

All in all I really like the Idea and concept behind this series, there are still minor problems which some may dont like. I personally dont really mind them and still quite enjoy reading. The only problem is, after getting far into the series you can see minor problems with the translation which can disrupt the imersion. Still, thats the only real minus point in my view, thats also the reason I give 4/5 instead of 5/5.

I hope my review is helpfull to some :)

I personally would recommend reading it, if you like Magic and enjoy a good framework behind it!
 
  • #2
I'm in the beginning if the story.. the biggest flaw what I see in the beginning itself is, she didn't have a miscarriage even after having a high fever for few days and also suffered in snow... except that the story is good so far... but if auther is going to potray Jasper as a good man, then its a waste of spending my money on this story..
 
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