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Fun premise, but gets long winded and stale the longer you read.MC is cold and serious. ML is a good amount of foolish sweet who later becomes blackbelly. Child is adorable. Interactions are fun up to mby 60chs in.plot is grindy. Grind for experirnce points, levels, and realms against opponents that are way stronger than you until the ML goes dragon form (aka super saiyan) and wins just barely. Not enough of the events matter to the plot more than the exerience points of doing them (as in- who cares that you lied for years, we forgive you because it is convenient for this battle) Smut scenes are fun (front loaded in the story. Expect them to peter off) System is useless. There is one, but it shows up so infrequently THE MC FORGOT IT EXISTED. Didnt really need to be there