- #1
Starts good but gets progressively more boring. I normally enjoy these type of light stories with a bit of drama, face slapping, and a cute bun to keep things light but... the scenes with the bun start to overtake the story. Not unusual to go a couple chapters of nothing but the bun broken up with only a few paragraphs of plot. Honestly I've started skimming the parts with the bun because they feel like filler and they waterdown the actual plot. The bun also is a little too idealistic, doesn't feel like a real child.I agree with a lot of Stillgryffinpuff points but it just makes for easy light read when you don't want to think to hard. I will keep reading because I'm a sucker for these type of light dramas but I'll continue to skim the bun parts.